Not having met you
Never made me feel empty,
But having met you
Makes me feel weak,
Never made me feel empty,
But having met you
Makes me feel weak,
Not that I can't survive,
But it's a struggle of not wanting to,
A struggle of knowing
All that should be known,
And yet unable to
Hold back from the unknown,
A dying sense of urgency
Although there is none in the vicinity,
A profound feeling of having found
A feeling so intense
That it just couldn't be spent
Even after exhausting every cent.
it's beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)🌻
DeleteDeep poetry, great work✨
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DeleteNice 👏🏼 I didn't know you had this talent as well Fatema ! Keep Going 👌🏼
ReplyDeleteThis means so much!😊thanks a lot🌻
DeleteAmazing one di. Keep writing. ✌️
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot😊🌻
DeleteBeautifully penned :)
ReplyDeleteHey thank you :)
DeleteNice
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteAppreciate your poetry depth
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DeleteYou have huge talented please Don’t waste it😂
ReplyDeleteLol, thank you✨
DeleteLikhna band kar diya kya ??
ReplyDeletehaan it has slowed down at the moment
DeleteLekin Kyu, tumhari poems se Shanti milti hai, sukoon milta hai padh ke. Relate kar paate hai khud ki takleef, marz ki tarah kaam karte hai tumhare shabd.
DeleteThank you very much✨🙌
Deletekya baat hai... like it re
ReplyDeleteThank you😊✨
DeleteQuestion! Here, are you talking about women or general human behaviour?
ReplyDeleteWell, it's gender neutral. It's basically about someone's strong hold on you (the person reciting the poem).
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